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I heard you fuck by =target-surgery:icontarget-surgery:

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©2009 =target-surgery
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I heard you fuck through the wall, I heard you fuck.
When I'm bored, I send vibrations
In your direction, from a satellite mind.


fufufufu It's hot today! 8D

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`Cyantre Jul 11, 2009, 3:34:32 PM
The title of this piece certainly does a fine job as an attention getter, and the quality of this photograph does a fine job of that as well.

The white light against your skin works well in bringing out your blue eyes, the black rims of your glasses, and the soft pink color of your lips. The expression on your face is also quite alluring, especially in contrast with the title.

The title and pose suggest you are listening to sounds, though your eyes also hint that you are seeing something take place, or perhaps the sounds are creating a visual picture for you as your mind wanders.

Great job on all the aspects of the piece. Everything works quite well together.
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*ptownherbil720 Jul 11, 2009, 2:07:45 PM
I like this, a lot! The title tickles my fancy xD Also, the... what do you call it. I dunno. I like the ratio of the photo, I guess. How the person's face dominates the photograph, you know.
The lighting of the photo is perfect. Every detail can be seen. Good work on catching the light so that it didn't make a glare on the glasses! The comment is nice, as well. Kind of like a little poem to go with it :) Just letting you know, this is my very first critique (I got a subscription less than ten minutes ago :) ) And so, I hope you vote my critique 'fair'!
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*TheDeviantIndigo Jul 11, 2009, 2:03:46 PM
You keep getting prettier and prettier with every picture you put up! :blush:

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=unused-nick Jul 11, 2009, 2:04:54 PM
lovely title .. haha.

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=target-surgery Jul 11, 2009, 2:04:59 PM
Thank you so much!

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=target-surgery Jul 11, 2009, 2:06:48 PM
Hahaha. <3

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"Me and the skeleton rose, lay on our backs one night. Watching those luminous roads, tying knots in the night.
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=target-surgery Jul 11, 2009, 2:06:58 PM
Why thank you. <3

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"Me and the skeleton rose, lay on our backs one night. Watching those luminous roads, tying knots in the night.
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=brad-macd Jul 11, 2009, 2:09:26 PM
let's.

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=target-surgery Jul 11, 2009, 2:12:06 PM
>D

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"Me and the skeleton rose, lay on our backs one night. Watching those luminous roads, tying knots in the night.
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